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Example Essays

Learn by comparing 2:2 essays with First-class essays on the same topics

What You'll Learn

1

Thesis Quality

See how First-class theses are more specific and arguable

2

Evidence Use

Learn how to integrate sources critically, not just descriptively

3

Critical Analysis

Understand the difference between describing and evaluating

4

Structure & Flow

See how First-class essays create logical, cohesive arguments

How to Use These Examples

  1. 1Choose a subject that matches your essay (or is similar to your topic)
  2. 2Read the 2:2 essay first — notice what works and what doesn't
  3. 3Toggle to the First-class version and compare side-by-side
  4. 4Click on highlighted sections to see explanations of what makes them stronger
  5. 5Apply these techniques to your own writing!